Raya shivered. She was beginning to doubt Sultan Kacbar's plans as they flew on the regal steed Hoap to the twin-towered city of Chainge.
(140)
And another one:
Jorj Ssoros (the parrot) spoke. Destroy capitalism, Karbac, & you'll be Sultan of the World. The people will depend on you, not themselves.
(140)
Susan at Stony River Farm hosts Microfiction Monday. She posts a picture and you compose a story in 140 characters. You can click on Susan at Stony River Farm to get further instructions. Here's a link that will count your characters for you: Design 215.
Thank you for hosting, Susan.
29 comments:
Both are great ones, Pat, but yours always are!
Sylvia
Liked them both,you sure know how to entertain with your words!
I also liked them both! Clever use of words!
These were excellent. Nicely done.
Pat,
You've got me in your corner now! Loved it - very clever!
~Jean
ZZZZING! Most Excellent Pat! Wow! Very well done!
Oh, very well done -- and so true!
Both were really good, I can't decide which one I like more.
Definitely makes me want to know what happens next! :O)
So well done. I admire your creativity.
So creative my friend. They both are excellent. Have a great week ahead :)
Great stories!
I like the first one the best! :-)
Well, you're in an anagramistic mood today, Pat! Very clever satire. (Just so you know, I like parrots.)
Have a great week.
I loved them, like little tasters of a story to come!
My vote is a solid majority for the first one, Pat.
Hoap is a nice horse. It is just too bad the Sutan is not to be trusted.
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Doubts while being whisked away on the wings of Hoap? That does sound like deviltry afoot!
They are both great, but especially the first. Brilliant as always!
Have a great week x
Prophesies of doom in both of these - great takes:-)
Ray is smart to be wary, I fear. :) And it seems appropriate that the parrot should be so wise. Good ones!
lol... why does it always seem already too late when we begin doubting, I wonder. Nice MM!
Wonderfully done ... both of them!!
Very clever. I like it.
I figured my link was wrong... but only because you pointed it out to me. 8/
Thank you for stopping by though.
Your heroine and mine had their doubts this week. ;)
That is clever and intriguing. Loved it!
That high up I'd be shivering too! :)
Gotta love the fantasy. I was looking at the picture trying to figure out how people were going to write this. There are so many different forms are art and expression, no?
Michelle: Yes, I'm always amazed at the myriad of different creative "stories" people come up with. (that is, ...with which people come up.)
awesome micro story... i enjoyed them both.
Caution is a good thing !
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